Chapter 47 0047: The Legend of Jiang Yuyan?
Mo Lan: "..."
You, a brokerage company owner, actually told the brokerage director of your company that you have no future as a broker?
What a reverse operation.
But having said that, being a producer is much better than being an agent. At least you have enough power. You are the soul of the entire film and television drama, deciding the style, type and market direction of the film.
In fact, you can consider it.
On the side, Gu Yao's eyes gleamed, and the surging excitement could not be concealed.
After reading the script, what she liked was not the innocent Murong Xian who dared to love and hate, nor the eccentric and lovable Su Ying, nor the kind-hearted and simple Tie Xinlan who was soft on the outside but strong on the inside. The smart and vicious Jiang Yuyan.
This character had a very special attraction for her, and the pain, obsession, cruelty and persistence in love shocked her heart.
After confirming that he wanted to play Jiang Yuyan and that he had to change the script for it, he couldn't help but say: "Then, wouldn't this "Little Yu'er and Hua Wuque" become "The Legend of Jiang Yuyan"?"
This is indeed the case. Xiao Yu'er and Hua Wuque were originally the last ones left. If it were changed to Jiang Yuyan as the last left, wouldn't it be "The Legend of Jiang Yuyan".
Gong Li, however, was not interested. Considering the first words Jiang Ge said to him, I am afraid that neither Xiao Yuer nor Hua Wuque would be able to act.
So unwilling!
Otherwise, go to Jiang Ge to discuss it. If you don't like it, fix it.
Jiang Ge spoke: "We need to modify it in that direction so that when the audience sees the drama "Little Fish and Flowers", the first thing that comes to mind is Jiang Yuyan."
In terms of ranking, the first male protagonists are Xiao Yu'er and Hua Wuque, the first female protagonists are Murong Xian, Su Ying and Tie Xinlan, and Jiang Yuyan is considered the second fan.
If you follow the original script and play Jiang Yuyan well, it will be easy to attract fans.
But Jiang Ge felt that this was far from enough. He believed that Jiang Yuyan's role could be highlighted from several main characters to deepen the audience's impression when watching.
If you ask how much of the original plot "Xiao Yuer and Hua Wuque" has restored, then the answer is that it only borrowed the name.
Since Wang Jing can carry out large-scale magic transformation, so can he.
After hearing this, Mo Lan's expectations for this drama rose to a higher level and said: "If this is the case, I think some of the scenes of Liu Xi, the eunuch, can be transferred to Jiang Yuyan."
Django asked: "How to say?"
Mo Lan explained: "First of all, the final boss of this drama is Jiang Yuyan, but the one who hands out the most lunch boxes is Liu Xi. Secondly, Liu Xi is a purely vicious person, a villain with no sense of three-dimensionality, and almost no Personal charm, this kind of confrontation between good and evil will make people feel like a model show, and many bento boxes are delivered inexplicably and without logic. "
Hearing this, Jiang Ge chuckled and said, "Insightful."
He felt the same way.
Both are eunuchs and villains, Cao Zhengchun in "The Best in the World" simply outshines Liu Xi.
Gong Li is a person who repays every drop of kindness. Since he is still in Huafeng Media, no matter whether it is prosperous or declining, as long as he is within his ability, he will contribute.
I was disappointed when I missed the opportunity to play the leading role, but I still used my ten years of acting experience to analyze it, and then I thought about it and said: "I think this part of the plot can be changed to Liu Xi being used by Jiang Yuyan, so that these characters can His death was due to Liu Xi's strength, Jiang Yuyan's strategy and the unpredictability of the world, not because of his own ingenuity."
Jiang Ge's eyes lit up and he praised: "Good advice."
It is a good direction to add some vivid details to make Jiang Yuyan's character fuller.
Protruding, but not too protruding, and other characters should also be made more three-dimensional.
Because safflowers need good green leaves to match them.
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In this way, time passed quietly during the plot discussion.
One person is short-sighted, two people are wise, and three people are as good as Zhuge Liang.
With appropriate changes, the quality of the script will only be higher and not lower, and this is very important to support Gu Yao.
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After returning home in the evening and having dinner, Jiang Ge plunged into revising the script.
At this time, the ability to write novels for several years in the previous life on earth came into use.
Jiang Ge carefully read the script from beginning to end with a picky attitude, combined with what he had talked about with Mo Lan and the others today.
Only when I got closer did I realize that there were a lot of problems in it.
The whole story is an anticlimactic one, with a great start and the IQ and EQ of each character are online. In order to forcibly create a tragedy in the later stage, the drama of "good guys are in vain every time they save people, and bad guys can always harm others unintentionally" is staged again and again.
for example:
The little fairy saved the whole family from being slaughtered, but not only did she not save anyone, but she also took the life of the Nanhai Goddess.
Liu Xi could easily capture the two palace masters of Yihua Palace with one palm.
Hua Wuque went to Yihua Palace to rescue two masters who had lost all their martial arts skills. They both committed suicide and gave Tie Xinlan a child in vain.
Hua Wuque learned Hunyuan Zhenqi to save the five yang and two yin, but failed to save any of them, leaving only the little fairy to live for two more days.
Jiang Yuyan can open the Liuren Divine Dice with one click.
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As Jiang Ge read it, he marked the areas that needed to be modified and wrote the direction of the modifications.
Modification does not mean destroying the original script.
In order to create a topic to attract attention, and to make changes in the hope that the more misfortunes you get, the more outrageous it will be, it is not worth following.
Instead, the script was modified without changing the core of the original script, such as adding details that were ignored to make the characters more full.
Jiang Ge decided to modify the original script, to put it in a high-sounding way, in order to better present this classic TV series that is quite popular on Earth, or to put it simply, to add more scenes for Jiang Yuyan.
Modifying a script is a big project, not just changing the plot, but also lines, scene transitions, costumes, props, etc.
Fortunately, there is basic knowledge about scripts in [Entry-level Director Knowledge], otherwise I don’t know where to start.
Time flows from my fingertips like water, and half a month has passed without me noticing this modification.
Jiang Ge finally understood why screenwriters always like to delay their manuscripts.
Writing a script is a process of self-questioning, self-debating, and self-division. Inspiration is needed to support the ideas. Most of the time, there is no clue at all, and the things written by force are of no quality.
For screenwriters, there are only three situations in which they do not delay their manuscripts:
1. The subject matter has been repeated and has been written to death, and it is easy to do, and it is done with infinite nesting dolls.
2. A genius, inspiration comes as easily as eating and drinking, and the efficiency is outrageous.
3. Not suitable for this job at all, just self-entertainment the whole time.
In order to revise the script of "Little Fish and Flowerless", Jiang Ge did not leave the house for eleven days, repeating the same thing every day: writing, deleting, and writing.
If it weren't for the previous experience of dying suddenly after working on a novel for three consecutive days on Earth in the previous life, I would have to write for several consecutive nights!
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