Chapter 77 Sanjiang's Remarks Are About to End the Volume.

Chapter 77 Sanjiang Reflection + End of Volume Summary

I’m here to inform you that Sanjiang will be recommended on the homepage at noon this Sunday. If nothing goes wrong, it will be on the shelves next week.

Thank you readers for your support and editor Liu Xing for your help, which has made this book achieve unexpected results.

I don’t know what to write in the reflections, but I’m quite excited.

I’ll take this opportunity to say something from my heart and review the plot of the first volume.

The original intention of writing this book is actually quite simple.

I want to make up for some regrets in the original work and also want to make some money.

Choosing Douluo fan fiction is not a good idea. Because this subject has been written too much, and there are Douluo fan fiction everywhere.

But after looking around, most Douluo fan fiction revolves around the protagonist upgrading and then beating Tang San.

It’s actually quite fun to watch the plot of torturing Tang San, because the behavior of this protagonist is really not very pleasing, but I want to write something different.

I think the most regrettable thing about Douluo Continent is that the female characters who were originally very outstanding, such as Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong, and even Gu Yuena, Bo Saixi, etc., were all very individual at the beginning, but they became tools one by one in the later period, which is a pity.

And Bibi Dong, although many of her behaviors are very outrageous, I think the original ending is not good. Bibi Dong should not have been a love-brained person until the moment of death.

Especially these characters have great initial personalities, and they are very good in comics and animations, which makes people feel even more regretful.

I also don’t want to write the protagonist as a human-shaped self-propelled artillery, and the female characters will throw themselves into his arms and become crazy when they see him.

So when I was portraying the protagonist, I always avoided too much description of his appearance, wanting to show more of his inner things and infect the female characters with his personal charm.

At first, I thought that with ideas, outlines, and the content I wanted to write in each volume, there was no reason not to be able to write, and it should be very smooth.

But when I really started writing, I found that this process was actually much more difficult than I imagined.

Online novels are serialized, and writing them down will inevitably lead to many readers forgetting the previous chapters or not knowing much about the future development path.

However, the blandness of the transition chapters will also cause readers to be bored, so we must strike a balance.

I have to consider the excitement of each chapter, the rhythm and coherence of the plot, and the personality of each character and their behavior patterns in different situations.

It is really difficult to be comprehensive.

After all, I am not one of those old authors. My writing skills are still lacking, and my psychological tolerance is not that strong.

When I encounter doubts in the comments, I often want to refute and explain, instead of directly banning or deleting comments. So far, I have banned comments that are spammy, unpleasant, or rhythmic. Now, if you go to the book review area, there are still many criticisms of me there. (This won’t happen after the book is put on the shelves. I only read comments from readers with fan value. Consumers are God and the parents who provide food and clothing. All others are the same. And I don’t have that much energy. Negative comments really affect my mentality.)

Looking back at the first volume, I don’t know if you have noticed that the real core storyline is not the original events, or the plot of the protagonist’s upgrade, but Qian Renxue.

I think I did a pretty good job in portraying Qian Renxue.

Regarding the blackened second personality, this is a secondary creation, but it is not illogical.

In the original book, when Qian Renxue was taking the God Test, it was clearly mentioned that there was always a dark side in her heart. In the anime, this part was also extended. During the God Test, a black Qian Renxue appeared and fought against her.

In fact, I haven’t watched many anime plots of Douluo, but I have seen this classic scene many times. It is really exciting.

I made a richer setting for it.

This volume has basically entered the end here. There is only the final plot with Qian Renxue left to wrap up, and the first volume "Angel's Sorrow" is finished.

This volume has some good writing, but also some problems.

Let's talk about the problems.

There are some differences in the behavior of the protagonist in the simulator and in reality.

The main reason is the rhythm.

Looking back now, the biggest problem is that the progress in the simulation is too fast, and the plot in the real line is too slow, and there is no balance and coordination.

In the simulator, some plots can be described through fast-forward perspective, and the coherence of the plot will be stronger, and it will appear to be loose and tight, and the reading experience will be better. However, the foreshadowing of some plots is not in place, and the emotional climax at the end is not full. In fact, it can be handled better but it was not done. I was in a hurry at the time, which is a pity.

Later, when I returned to reality, the world view and character personality were more fixed, and the space I could play in the writing was much smaller. The plot was too slow, which exposed many problems.

In terms of planning and layout, we must also consider the current age of the protagonist and the resources behind him. There are also many developments in the relationship between the main characters that need to be explained, which further compresses the room for maneuver, and the writing will be more "tight".

Not only is the timeline tight, but the rhythm is also tight, and it is difficult to find a perfect balance.

I will further optimize the details in the following plots and correct this problem.

Then I will talk about the controversial plots.

Some people may not like the common face-slapping plots, but not all readers do. There can be fewer such plots, but they cannot be absent.

Simulator writing is different from astronomy. The proportion of simulation and reality needs to be considered, which is a very realistic problem.

Some people prefer to read simulations, while others prefer to read reality.

In general, people should prefer to read simulations more. There is no way, the beginning of this book starts with simulation, and the title is also here.

But as a fan fiction of Douluo, it is impossible to leave the reality line alone. At most, the proportion is a little lower, which is also a question of trade-offs.

Some readers think that the first simulation at the beginning is very exciting and the layout is very good. In fact, this is a compliment to me.

I did write different layout outlines for each simulation, but this is not the main purpose.

I wrote this kind of plot because I want to show the characteristics of each character, make the personalities of these characters more distinct, and make their future changes reasonable, just like Qian Renxue in the first volume.

Doubts are always inevitable.

This novel has less than 200,000 words so far, and there are many things that have been said.

The first big rhythm was the ending in the simulation. At that time, I specially opened a single chapter to explain it. I will not do this in the future. The problem will be left to the end of the volume.

The second is the gambling fight with Tang San.

I still hope that everyone will not confuse the fan fiction with the original work.

I agree that Tang Hao is weak, irresponsible, has no martial ethics, and bullies the weak. But you can't regard him as a murderer or a lunatic. No matter how shameless Tang Hao is, he is not an evil spirit master. No matter how crazy he is, he will not expose himself and Tang San for such a small matter.

Targeting the weak, that is to treat the Wuhun Hall camp, and other weak people will not be killed, let alone a seven-year-old kid. As for the Zhao Wuji incident in the original work, not to mention that Zhao Wuji and Tang San are not of the same generation, Tang Hao did not kill Zhao Wuji in the end, right?

In terms of character portrayal, I have a general portrait of all the main characters. If you don't agree, I don't have a better way.

Fan fiction is like this. As a secondary creation, different people must have deviations in their understanding of characters and plots, and we can only seek common ground while reserving differences.

Then there is the Ning Rongrong line. The handling of this aspect is indeed a bit inappropriate, and the protagonist's words at the beginning are somewhat contradictory.

My original intention was to make the relationship between the two people change from cold to warm, which is also suitable for writing Ning Rongrong's emotional line.

My idea at that time was very simple, and I also explained it in the text. The protagonist had never talked to the opposite sex of the same age before. This kind of mentality led to the slip of the tongue. After all, adults look at children differently from their peers.

But the process was not handled well, and the writing was not strong enough, which led to sensory deviation.

Moreover, the pace of online novels is fast now, and everyone is in a state of chasing updates. If you don't read it in a coherent way, the feeling will definitely be less than expected.

Regardless of whether the logic is smooth, it does affect the reading experience. I'm sorry.

There is also the plot of delivering medicine later.

This plot is actually more transitional, but it cannot be written.

This is related to the relationship between many characters and the foreshadowing of the later text.

I chose a more compromised method, first try it out, and then use Ye Lingling's hand to speed it up. In retrospect, it was a bit anxious. It might be better to let the protagonist get along with the team members for a few days before proposing ideas.

Another thing is the protagonist's behavior in reality. Some people think it's too reckless, while others think it's too cowardly.

Maybe it's because I didn't lay the groundwork enough or my expression was not clear enough, and it was too obscure, which led to some readers' misunderstanding.

After the protagonist came out of the mountain, he came into contact with people he was sure to control, such as Ning Fengzhi, who was utilitarian and liked to win over talents, or Dugu Bo, who valued promises and loyalty and had fully understood in the simulation. He consciously avoided people like the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus Rex Sect (which could have been contacted through Yu Tianheng), the Spirit Temple, or Xue Beng and Xue Qinghe, whose temperaments had changed.

The result probably made people with both views a little unhappy?

I am a new author, so I can only summarize more and work hard to improve in the future.

Some foreshadowing will be written as clearly as possible, instead of blindly pursuing the so-called sense of rhythm.

At the same time, in terms of excitement, a more balanced arrangement will be made. Some plots will not be too long, and some plots will not seem a little hasty.

In the final analysis, it is still due to lack of experience, which will be changed in the second volume.

In the future, I will try to revise the detailed outline better and write more excitingly.

Thanks again to the readers who are willing to continue to support me. I bow to you all!

As for those who don't like this book, there is no need to waste time on it.

Reading novels is originally for relaxation. Why bother too much and make yourself unhappy. There are many good novels on Qidian. There are more than a dozen Sanjiang recommended novels every week, and there are a lot of Douluo fan fictions. There are a lot of options for everyone. Don't criticize me here. Some people are really unnecessary. If you don't like it, just change a book. Always chase and find faults. Why do you change the small account after you are banned?

There is no problem with giving opinions on details. I will also refer to those that make sense. Forget about those who read with scarlet reading or rhythm.

Then I can't change the outline and the main plot. There are too many precedents where authors have changed and collapsed directly.

In addition, I will spoil it in advance. There will be about ten chapters before this volume ends. There will be no misunderstanding between Su Cheng and Qian Renxue.

Volume 2: The Empress of Xingluo, core characters: Zhu Zhuqing and Qian Renxue.