End of Volume Summary

This volume of the story will come to an end here for the time being. Next, a new volume will begin, which is also the last volume of the book.

At that time, all the stories will be concluded, and the male and female protagonists will also have an ending.

Let me briefly report the results first.

This month, I got the 10,000-subscription badge, which is the best among the Douluo fan fiction. I am very grateful to all the readers for their recognition and tolerance of this third-rate writer.

To be honest, I didn’t write the third volume very well, and there were many problems in controlling the rhythm of the plot.

The simulation part is okay, basically proceeding in the direction originally expected, including the final ending, which I am personally satisfied with.

The problem lies in the real plot.

Originally, I didn’t want to write Xiaoxue, the first female protagonist who really had an intimate relationship with the protagonist.

But due to various reasons, I had some deviations in controlling the details of the plot, and the portrayal of some characters was also lacking in strength in the early stage, which led to this result.

If it weren’t for this, I wouldn’t have to spend so much ink and ink to make up for it in the later stage, making some plots appear complicated and redundant.

The fundamental reason is that the outline is not filled enough. I will pay attention to it in the future if it could be written more smoothly.

In the second half of this volume, I actually felt more tired than the first two volumes.

In order to fill the characters, the emotional lines are described too much, occupying other interspersed contradictions and conflicts, including the part of the City of Slaughter and the part of Tiandou City, etc.

This is a pity. The plot could have been richer, so that everyone could have a better reading experience.

Of course, there are also satisfactory places.

The main part is the portrayal of the heroine.

Qian Renxue's previous characterization was almost complete, and in this volume, Zhu Zhuqing's character image has also been enriched a lot.

The most important thing is that Bibi Dong's overall character image is relatively full.

From the simulation at the beginning, to the change of mentality after waking up from the dream, the change of attitude towards Su Cheng and those women, to the complete personality of walking out of the road of hell.

I am personally quite satisfied with the whole change process.

I have never set her as a broad-minded woman.

Everything she did was just a concession made out of necessity to get a certain relationship.

Her positioning of Zhu Zhuqing is actually part of her own voice.

I see that some readers have commented on her in this chapter as "Snow White's vicious stepmother", which is indeed a bit similar.

This kind of character is actually quite interesting as the heroine, isn't it?

Finally, it's a question of the mentality of the heroines.

Although Zhu Zhuqing has resentment, it is acceptable. Coming late is only one aspect. The most important thing is the influence of her background environment.

As for Bibi Dong, the title of the first chapter after leaving the simulation is "Unworthy", which is actually her mentality.

Ah Yin has a weak personality, a simple mind, and is also easy to grasp.

Only Qian Renxue is obviously unable to accept this situation at present, so she will choose to leave temporarily.

If not, no matter how Bibi Dong plans, she can't force her away.

The relationship between Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong determines that if these two are the heroines, I must think about how to arrange the plot.

All are written consistently. I don't know if the readers are satisfied with this setting.

As for the protagonist... Well, you can scold him if you want, the scumbag deserves to be scolded!

If you want to open a harem, but you don't have the kingly spirit of Long Aotian that can make hundreds of beauties surrender, the process will naturally become tortuous.

You must also be prepared to be scolded by thousands of people, pierced by a sword, and torn apart by a hatchet.

I think Su Cheng has been mentally prepared!

Finally, I would like to apologize to everyone.

Due to work reasons, I have a lot of things to do at the end of the year, so the update is a bit lame, please understand.

It's not that I'm lazy or something, after all, no one wants to make money, right?

It's just that I hope the first book can have a good result, and I don't want to make money by writing watery articles, or do things perfunctorily.

I can write interesting daily life, I can write about the advancement of the emotional line, but I can't write meaningless accounts.

Only by writing seriously can I accumulate experience and lessons, so that I can continue to write other books in the future.

P.S. I don't have enough experience writing this book. When I write this book, I will definitely organize the outline. The plot of the third volume was forced to change in the later period, which is really frustrating...

The next volume will expand to the world of soul beasts, and then touch on the high-level power, that is, the pattern of the God Realm.

Because there are many contradictions in the original setting, and because of the pits related to the principle of "simulator", I will also make appropriate changes to the original plot and settings.

If you haven't watched the subsequent Douluo, it will not affect your viewing. In fact, I haven't watched it much. It's all the plots that I made up recently for the writing of the fourth volume. There are not many related contents.

Except for the group of soul beasts headed by the Silver Dragon King, there will not be too many portrayals of others.

Tomorrow will start the fourth volume: Dragon King's Counterattack.