End of Volume Summary

First, let me briefly report the results.

The current data is still normal, whether it is subscription or follow-up subscription, it has been steadily increasing.

The average subscription is 7,200, which is a lot higher than the first subscription, and the collection has exceeded 50,000.

Thank you very much for the support of the readers.

There are also the big guys who vote for the monthly ticket silently every day. Although many people rarely speak, I am very familiar with their IDs. Thank you again.

Orz

In addition, except for the comments that lead the rhythm or flood the screen, I generally rarely delete comments or ban them.

There are even several long comments in the book friend circle. Although they are criticizing me, I have also added them to the highlights.

I think since so many comments have been written, they must be readers who have read the plot carefully.

Regardless of whether I personally agree with these suggestions or criticisms, I thank you for your support for this book.

Summarize the second volume.

Let me talk about the simulation plot first.

Unlike the first simulation, this simulation involves too few core characters.

The first time there was a rivalry between Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, but this time, the main line involved at the beginning was to train Zhu Zhuqing.

Unless I do the setting of Zhu Zhuyun again, but I always feel that it is not very interesting.

However, as I wrote, I found that this setting was a bit too thin.

In order to avoid water writing and running accounts, I had to speed up the progress of the simulated plot.

The main reason for this situation is that the detailed outline setting is a bit taken for granted, and the details are not considered enough.

This will be corrected and optimized in the plot setting of the next volume, and the character conflicts will be made more intense as much as possible.

Then there is the real main plot.

There is no big problem with the progress of this part.

From Zhu Zhuqing, to Qian Renxue, and then to the meeting of the three, everything is straightened out.

The relationship between the characters is basically shown more clearly here.

Including the first collision between the two heroines, and the change of concept caused by Ah Yin due to the soul ring incident.

Zhu Zhuqing took advantage of an opportunity created by Su Cheng and connected with Bibi Dong through her own efforts, and also balanced the gap in strength between herself and Qian Renxue to a certain extent.

As for what happens later, both of them know each other's existence now, and it depends on their own actions.

Back to the Soul Master Competition itself, I think that neither the battle process nor the final victory or defeat is particularly important.

At least it is not so important that I need to sacrifice rationality to give the protagonist cheats in order to win in the end.

The core plot of this book is not to show off and slap in the face, which is only a secondary adjustment.

If I write original works, I will definitely add more ink to this part.

But if it is Douluo fan fiction, to be honest, showing off and slapping in the face has been written too much, and there is no need to win the final championship.

There are no spectators, the finals are closed, only the colleges of both sides of the contestants and a group of big men are present, and the protagonist's performance is also outstanding enough, and he has done all the pretentious things, which is enough.

What's more, the Spirit Hall itself is not a hostile force, and the protagonist's purpose in participating in the competition at the beginning is just to show his strength.

The climax of the reality line is actually to get the soul ring.

However, this part is not written very well, and it feels a lot less heated, but everything that should be written is still written.

Finally, let's talk about the controversial plot.

One is the simulation of Zhu Zhuqing. In summary, I have reflected on it at the beginning. This part is indeed lacking some consideration in the plot setting.

The other is the line of Ah Yin.

If you want to write this emotional line, you must have a strong medicine once, otherwise it is difficult for Ah Yin to realize his true thoughts from the perspective of character setting.

The main problem is that the foreshadowing is not enough, and this part of the plot should be handled better.

Then there are several controversial places for the main characters. Let me briefly talk about my thoughts.

If the harem text wants to shape the heroine with personality, it is necessary to weaken the hero to a certain extent. If the hero is over-highlighted, it is difficult not to sacrifice the personal characteristics of the female character.

Unless there is no harem and a single heroine is written, then if the male and female protagonists play against each other, the two people will get along more evenly, just like the situation of Su Cheng and Qian Renxue in the first simulation.

Or write an imaginary ancient background, three wives and four concubines belong to the normal world view, and the heroine can easily accept it, that's fine.

But if you write a Shura field, there must be at least two relatively strong and important female characters.

This is determined by the worldview background. A heroine with a personality will not easily accept sharing of feelings.

It's a question of trade-offs.

When I started writing this book, I set the tone and designed the personalities of several main female characters.

I really didn't want to be reborn in Lao Liu's masterpiece. Chen Hansheng was scolded so much in it. (I don't mean to compare with the great god. I just use this classic urban harem novel as an example. After all, this book is deeply rooted in people's hearts.)

Is Chen Hansheng not rich enough? Is his social status not high enough?

Why are Xiaoyuer and Shen Youchu unwilling to accept him opening a harem?

If there is no such independent personality, will these two heroines still be liked by so many readers?

Those who say that it is because the protagonist is not strong enough have interesting ideas.

This is like in reality, because you have money, so you support several people. Then, are these people with you for feelings or for money?

Or do you think that as long as the protagonist is invincible, with Qian Renxue's personality in this book, he will be allowed to open a harem at will?

Who would be willing to share a female character with a truly independent personality with others?

This is not the ancient worldview where the Three Bonds and Five Constant Virtues are deeply rooted in people's minds, and it is normal for men to have three wives and four concubines.

Why do they do this?

Even if the protagonist is invincible, they are unwilling to share.

Because they are not after the protagonist's strength, but this person.

If you want to see a mindless man who collects girls, you can go directly to a stallion novel, where there are many female characters, and they don't care about the protagonist hugging left and right, and they are happy to see one after another.

In addition to the reasons mentioned above, you must also consider the character's personality.

Not willing to share does not mean that you can't share, and it depends on the person.

If this matter is placed on Ah Yin in the book, or on someone like Hu Liena who admires the strong, it is valid.

But if it is placed on Qian Renxue in this article, or on Xiao Wu in the original work, it is unreasonable.

Qian Renxue can die for the protagonist, or die with the protagonist, or even exaggerate it, she can hold Cheng Ge's head and travel around the world on foot, but she will not accept the appearance of another person.

(Of course, the above is only the current situation.)

When it comes to Zhu Zhuqing, she is somewhat different from Qian Renxue.

Her emotions are not as morbid as Qian Renxue's, and her current conditions are weaker than Qian Renxue, so she will be calmer, think more deeply, and the means she uses will not be directly exposed.

But those need to be written later.

Why do many comments affect the mentality? It's because some comments don't think about it at all, they just raise their voices without thinking, skip the plot and still find bugs there, which is ridiculous. (It's not aoe, I read normal comments, and I haven't banned or deleted those who don't swipe the screen or lead the rhythm)

I have never used this account for writing books before. Sometimes I want to say a few words in the chapter commentary when I use the account I use to read books.

But I am afraid that I will be exposed and accused of using a small account to double-act, so I never post comments. To be honest, it's really uncomfortable to hold it back.

Next volume: The roar of the sea god

Main characters: Poseidon, Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, and A Yin.