I Am a Light Novel Master in Japan Chapter 337

Yukinoshita Yukino is sitting on a sunny cushion. Her delicate face, beautiful black hair hanging down in front of the table, her white and somewhat hazy shirt and school uniform that reveal the slightest hint of girlishness, all make the girl's beauty shine through. At the extreme, she put the review materials on the textbook, looked at Li Yan with eyes as calm as the sea, and asked: "Is my light novel really so funny?"

Li Yan and Teacher Mao suddenly felt chilled. She actually still cared about this matter.

Yukinoshita Yukino then continued: "Please don't get me wrong. I didn't intend to get angry because you laughed at the novel I wrote. The novel is for people to read. I can accept any evaluation. However, feel free to read other people's books. Bookshelf is a very disrespectful behavior."

"But, is the novel I wrote really that bad? Senior, don't laugh and then deny your thoughts, so I hope senior will tell me your thoughts after reading it." Yukinoshita Yukino asked.

Li Yan was silent for a while, and finally after a little struggle, he understood what Yukinoshita Yukino meant, nodded a few times, and began to say: "I understand, since you really want to understand, let me tell you my point of view. "

"The second young lady rarely takes the initiative to write light novels, but I have to praise the second young lady for her really good writing style. Although it can be seen that she is imitating the narration method in "Super Academy", her writing style is better than that of the original author. excellent."

Li Yan took out the paper and began to write the simple structure of the story described by Yukinoshita Yukino, and said seriously: "But it is easy for new authors to misunderstand that their favorite works must be pretty good. In fact, writing requires a lot of Accumulation, such as capturing the emotions of the characters, making the plot lively but not boring, and also the character design. Many people design the plot first and then the characters. This is an easy mistake to make. You must let the set characters go. Promoting the plot is the most basic way of writing."

"Well……"

Yukinoshita Yukino sat across from her, looking at the professional plot structure analysis of the draft. She looked at the draft with some surprise, and couldn't help but look at Li Yan who wrote the plot branches. Why did this moment make her feel There is a sense of difference.

"The story of the Second Lady was too limited at the beginning. It included all the characters, a strong female knight, and a follower who is always full of negative energy. A female follower who makes trouble but is very kind. If Fighting stories should not be written so clearly in one go. You should let readers see growth. This is the first point. The second point is the logic of the story. Many people will make mistakes on this point, even I am an old author. There is a contradiction in the paragraph you wrote. Second Miss, you must not have taken notes at all times. When you were writing, you forgot what the protagonist had done before, but later the protagonist and the follower were very firm in saying that they had not done anything. Reader This bug is easy to spot with a quick read."

Li Yan listed the bugs written by Yukinoshita Yukino to Yukinoshita Yukino and said.

"I see, it turns out there was really a mistake here..." Yukinoshita Yukino quietly looked at the plot tree diagram Li Yan listed, nodded, and said calmly.

Li Yan said with a smile: "If you try more, you will definitely make great progress. It turns out that Miss Er, you also like writing. We can communicate more with each other when writing in the future..."

"...Is it really okay? Will it disturb you in writing the eighth volume?"

She sat upright in front of Li Yan, looking as calm and focused as clear water as she looked at the plot diagrams Li Yan had listed. That kind of beauty seemed to be fresh, refined, and delicate that even thousands of years of vicissitudes in the world could not erase. But it can't be done.

The casual inquiry, the voice was not very loud, but the delicate and cold words shocked Li Yan slightly. Although Li Yan had already had a premonition that she knew his identity, he still couldn't help but look at her in embarrassment and shock. .

"In any case, all the evidence collected so far proves that you are Mr. Uesugi En... Sure enough, I guessed right. As for my sister, I probably knew it a long time ago. In the cliched and messy light novel world, I admit that senior The story I created is quite outstanding, so, Mr. Genius Uesugi En, if possible, I plan to add a writing subject to the study subjects for summer tutoring, is that okay?"

Yukinoshita Yukino raised her head, her beautiful black bangs swaying slightly in the morning breeze, her bright and beautiful eyes looking at him quietly, her calm face looking quite firm, and she added to her lessons without hesitation He learned a special subject and expressed his demands.

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After the day's tutoring in mathematics, physics and chemistry, it soon became dark.

"Look, this is what everyone expects, and this is a curse. If you don't write the eighth volume well, you will meet readers everywhere." Teacher Cat ate the sea fish, staring at Li Yan and said hypnotically.

"Quiet for a while, I'm thinking about something!"

Li Yan saw through Teacher Cat's attempt to hypnotize him at a glance and turn him into a being like a "novel code machine". While he was thinking and eating, he stared at it angrily and said.

"Who told you that you like to lie and delay updates so much? The seventh volume is very exciting. I really want to see how the eighth volume develops. The other monsters have pushed this supervisory responsibility to me. It's not easy for me either." Teacher Maomao ignored Li Yan's resistance and continued.

Li Yan was silent for a while, looked at Teacher Cat on the floor, and said thoughtfully: "I'm actually not good at writing, but I'm good at telling stories. In fact, writing, just like my Chinese, is more or less a failure... ...It's just that light novels are more tolerant of writing and grammatical errors, and the story is interesting. However, this industry has high instability factors, and readers' interests will change. I can't guarantee that I can keep writing and let Yukizhi Is it really okay for Xue Yukino to deepen his interest in this aspect?"

"Well, people all have dreams in order to live life. People are not monsters. They don't have so much time to wait to verify which one is suitable and which one is not suitable. Just let her learn it. It can be regarded as a common sense to shorten the path of confusion. , not to mention that the other party doesn’t seem to intend to write for the purpose of making money.” Teacher Maomao said.

"I don't write for the purpose of making money... Maybe I smell like copper. I don't think that unpaid writing will last for a long time, and will have better quality and content guarantees. Writing is also a kind of human labor. , no matter what, the mentality of writing for free will not make progress. If you deny the value of your work at the beginning, how can you make readers face the value of the author's work? It must be for a certain amount of remuneration and purpose. It’s only right to write.”

Li Yan denied Teacher Maomao's point of view and expressed his thoughts on his writing.

It should be said that Li Yan noticed that Yukinoshita Yukino seemed to be just trying, but she seemed to be seriously considering it...

At this moment, the doorbell rang from the door of this house.

"Teacher Li, are you still eating?" Yukinoshita Yono asked at the door.

"I've finished eating, just a moment."

Li Yan was slightly stunned and responded. He was a little curious about what Yukinoshita Yono wanted to see him at this time.

Teacher Cat immediately jumped on the table, bit into a piece of fried squid, and ran indoors to enjoy it.

Li Yan looked at the cat teacher who ran into the room. He opened the door and saw Yukinoshita Harano with a signature smile.

"Ah ho, Teacher Li." She said hello.

"What's the matter, Miss?" Li Yan asked.

"Hehe, your customary greetings are really unconventional. Can't I come to you if I have nothing to do? Well... I've already eaten. By the way, I just heard someone at the door that you were talking to, and there was someone coming over. ?"

Yukinoshita Yangno leaned forward, looked into the room with a smile, and asked.

"...No, it was just a phone call. The voice was a bit loud." Li Yan was startled and immediately lied and prevaricated.

"Um……"

Yukinoshita Yono pondered for a moment. She clearly sounded like she was speaking in the dining room at the door, and it didn't sound like the voice coming from the phone at all. But maybe she made a mistake, and then said with a smile: "Never mind. Well, I want to talk to you about something. Can we go to the half-empty garden of an apartment with beautiful scenery and suitable for dates to have a good chat? "

"...Why use some strange modifications to describe the half-empty garden of the apartment building?" Li Yan was silent and couldn't help but complain a few words in his heart.

It is 7:30 at night, a summer night with a thin moon. The high-end apartment building has specially arranged gardens in some vacant places to facilitate the residents to play. However, there is no one in the garden at this time, and the students are not interested in enjoying it, while the office workers It seems that he has not returned from working overtime, leaving only the woods and flowers and plants swaying slightly in the night wind, making a rustling sound, which has a unique artistic conception.

"It's pretty here, isn't it?"

Yukinoshita Yangno came here with Li Yan, smiled and asked.

"Well, yes." Li Yan looked at the night view of Chiba City downstairs and nodded.

Yukinoshita Harano stood in the garden. She didn't know whether it was because she was too tired from studying or because she was tired from work. She couldn't help but stretch her body. This move highlighted her proud breasts and made Li Yan's My eyes were drawn to it for a moment, almost unable to move away.

It should be said that Li Yan judged that he was not a womanizer, but he was troubled in his heart that when he was really in love, he couldn't help complaining in his heart: "Why is it that the second lady inherits the child from the same parents?" Her mother’s genes have made the eldest daughter Yangno unique... So she even beats her sister in figure, so why does the second daughter care so much about her outstanding sister? "

Of course, Li Yan discovered some details about the sisters, although he was not sure whether his inner speculation was correct.

"How is your review, Yukino-chan? Did you listen to your lectures attentively?" Yukinoshita Yono relaxed her muscles, then closed her eyes and breathed a sigh of relief, and asked with a smile.

"The review was pretty good. The second lady's learning ability is very good, so she basically mastered everything I said." Li Yan replied.

Yukinoshita Yono looked at the scenery and said casually: "Yes, that child is very smart, but he always likes to play tricks, which is really troublesome... Maybe after being taught by you for a year, she will dare to go Apply to Tokyo University, and I will join you at the highest university in Japan when you are a junior."

Li Yan was silent for a while, not sure whether this was a joke or true, and said: "I don't know about liberal arts at Dongda University, but the mathematics test for science is quite difficult. If she really plans to apply for Dongda University, It would be more appropriate to recommend her to learn more about the more famous training institutions in Tokyo."

"You're just kidding, don't take it seriously... Li Jun is really a serious person. By the way, Li Jun is so good at writing novels, will he also be a novelist in the future?" Yukinoshita Harano looked at him and asked curiously.

"...Well, I originally planned to give up writing novels and concentrate on studying in the direction of scientific research, but now I have changed my plan. Maybe there are still readers, so I will continue writing. But I currently plan to take two paths. If you want to go a little further...you must be a little greedy."

Li Yan smiled sheepishly, even complaining about himself, and said.

"I don't dare to speak nonsense about what you said, but... I have some opinions on what Yukino-chan said." Yukinoshita Yono raised her head, pressed her hand against the sky, and said.

"Um?"

Li Yan was stunned for a moment and looked at Yang Nai on the side. His conversation with Xue Nai was actually eavesdropped.